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Bubblespray Childhood by ~kiraiaso16:iconkiraiaso16:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Fixed




I am born from a bowl of gummy oatmeal.

of scabby Knees like red liquid plastik

of laughter swimming through

the sunday comics. Beetle Baily.

I lived through faucets that

when turned on pour out

snails. beautiful snails with

rainbow shimmer shells.

My breath becomes cotton

that forms a horrible itchy plaid dress
I am my forest.
©2004-2009 ~kiraiaso16
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Author's Comments

this type of writing is called a nonsense poem. yeah i find it amusing. its about my childhood. feel free to ask me and i'll explain bits of it. *shrug-smile* enjoy. and please make fun of it. it is meant to be funny.

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~fvielquen Jul 19, 2004, 12:49:39 PM
I'm still pretty sure I'm reading this wrong... a deviation by kiraiaso16? That makes TWO, right?

Hmm... poem's pretty good, though it makes absolutely no sense. I guess that was the point, though, wasn't it?

Wasn't "I am my forest" one of Zane's journals or something? (goes to check)

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"Look behind you! A three-headed monkey!"
-- The Secret of Monkey Island
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~kiraiaso16 Jul 19, 2004, 12:53:45 PM
yeah hence me telling him he stole it :)

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my love. who is much much more talented than me. Go see him. and make fun of him. ~ fleshling
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~fvielquen Jul 19, 2004, 12:55:25 PM
So.... do you make deviations and then delete them when you do something else? Or was that just this time? Or is my computer screwing up? All three have equal probability.

I tried to do a comment a minute ago but I don't know if it took, so I'll repeat the gist of it: Nice poem, makes absolutely no sense, that last line sounds a lot like a journal Zane did I think.

--
"Look behind you! A three-headed monkey!"
-- The Secret of Monkey Island
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~Elementalmagicks Jul 19, 2004, 4:42:36 PM
*gasp* Maggie made another deviation! Hell hath frozen to a frost! *hug* Good job mags. Was this the one you turned in for Little Timmy Dilg?
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~kiraiaso16 Jul 20, 2004, 8:55:48 AM
im answering you both in one comment. yes i deleted the first deviation because it sucks. and yes this was for dilg. and yes zane did steal some of this for his title.

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my love. who is much much more talented than me. Go see him. and make fun of him. ~ fleshling
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!erwilzei Jul 20, 2004, 11:25:47 AM
eeeeeee! maggie, this is awesome. i've never read anything like it, it's really great

:chainsaw::absolut:
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~alatarielcerebrindal Jul 23, 2004, 11:00:44 AM
yours is odd, but I guess taht is to be expected...I cant find my nonsense poem to submit. I should probably do that so people don't stop watching me or something...yeah i need to submit something. but you did, thats amazing...an almost impossible feat!
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~uninspiration Jul 23, 2004, 2:53:05 PM
Is it weird that the majority of this makes nearly perfect sense to me? Either way, good stuff. Congrats on submitting a thingie.
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~fleshling Aug 10, 2004, 6:46:36 PM
that's what i said!! talk some sense into her.
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